They will be making their films using iMovie. Here are some of their first experiments! Use accountable talk to give suggestions that can help them take their stories to the next level.
Jenesy's rough documentary opening
My story, JENESY from svafilm on Vimeo.
Shanoya's rough documentary opening...
Shannoya Movie from svafilm on Vimeo.
This video is very up beat however I would like to know what the message film is.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mr. Rhys. How would YOU transform this rough cut and entry into the digital editing process into a more compelling piece?
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ReplyDeleteAs always, this is a nice comment. However, with more detail, you could really help these filmmakers improve their work.
Please add a little detail to your comment.
Which student film are you referring to?
What details could they add to help build a message about who they are and where they are from?